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Wealth
By L on 01/07/2009
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Written by juniemoon_  (1/11/2009 7:46:57 PM)

this is Junie and I will try to give you a better way to phrase what you want to say.
Kises new as sunshine,
Her fingers trace his soft lips
reminder of his laughter
that hold her as does his embrace
Inside those eyes her soul
is filled with every wonder
the oceans hold
Love does not melt away
We fill each other long enough, strong
enough, to never let go
This is just a sample of what your poem could be in 3rd person
You MUST learn to write without rhyme
Go back to each of your poems and rework them without rhyme and see what happens.
If you truly want to be a poet you must learn your trade, if you want to get published you must write what sells and find markets to offer them to. Again get the catalog 'Poets Market 2009' and that will give you a good deal of info.
Posting online for other writers to critique is nothing but other mediocre writers 'giving a pat on the back' for poems that are not necessarily excellent. When you write and send poems to editors you will get either a fast rejection(develope a hard skin) or an acceptance and feel like a million bucks. read more excellent writing. Winning Writer.com is a good place to get places to send work. Beware of Contest many are also vanity press contest with "come ons"and promises of money prizes. Keep writing Junie

WOW 


Written by TR143  (1/11/2009 11:50:36 PM)

I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 


Written by TheDividedAngel  (4/6/2009 5:24:18 AM)



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