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"Dying Heart"
By BeautifulLiving0813 on 01/11/2009
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Written by Unknown Member  (1/11/2009 2:40:25 PM)

The words are very beautiful, yet very dark. They can relate if you can understand each and every metaphor.

Great job Tori!


Written by Unknown Member  (1/11/2009 3:28:44 PM)

Wow this was vividly haunting, and so unexpected. I loved it. Good job.

Fave Stanza:

"Peering into your eyes I see knives
Butcher knives in your soggy, rotting heart
Bloody hands slashing, slaughtering you apart
Dreadful darting
Darting for your soul
I see malicious demons from your head to your toes"


Written by amongsttheangels  (1/11/2009 9:25:15 PM)

So freakin well written Hueba!! XD


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Written by bornwriter  (2/21/2009 1:02:42 PM)

I love how dark this is! Yet its very light and ethereal......


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Written by Strange  (2/23/2009 3:02:12 PM)

The fluidity of this thick content is amazing. Thw dreadful darting stanza was piercing...Great Job!


Written by Pheonux  (2/23/2009 6:06:47 PM)

I truly loved this poem. The way you used the last word of the third verse in each stanza, as the beginning word in the next line, really caught my attention, and was used ingeniously.

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