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By rachelle1165 on 01/27/2009
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Written by JACKSON_SPEAKER  (1/27/2009 5:18:44 PM)

An exalent job!


Written by amongsttheangels  (1/27/2009 5:25:16 PM)

short but amazing, beautiful metaphors, like "in the journal of your absence" that was a great one...keep it up!!


Written by blogetry  (1/27/2009 6:03:32 PM)

The transition and impact of the last verse...suggest using past tense in verse verse...also luv the economy of words

Love it. 

Written by The girl with the thorn in her side  (1/28/2009 12:49:28 AM)

I just love how poems can be limited in the amount of words, but expression so clear and moving. This to me is a great example of that!


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Written by kayakndan  (1/29/2009 6:24:54 PM)

To echo the other comments. I love the concise and straightforward hit of the piece. I might have added the word ( , crumbling,) after "pages" just for a lil added punch.
I dig it though!

Short but sweet 

Written by Unknown Member  (3/30/2009 1:06:05 PM)

Flow is excellent. I especially the love the climax and anticlimatic approach used in these 2 short stanzas

Quite splendid 

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Written by IraFromSyosset  (3/30/2009 2:47:20 PM)

SO much with so few words.

Good Job 

Written by edanalandells  (3/31/2009 11:51:17 AM)

Love the words used! Such a lot said in such a few words.


Written by TheDividedAngel  (4/5/2009 10:42:28 AM)


Written by Jon von Nottingham  (4/15/2009 2:26:35 AM)

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