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What My Father Means...
By corsetfitz on 02/02/2009
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Written by lisavicious  (2/4/2009 5:36:09 PM)

For one, I would not use all caps when writing. It lessens the value of the overall when critiquing a poem.

You have a good foundation, a great message (I can totally realte to this!). I would try to dig deeper tho' into some imagery. Watch your punctuation. Either follow the guidelines of good/ proper English or free flow but you seem to mix both.

Keep it up! I am enjoying what I am reading so far.

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