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i have surrendered to heavier things
By nalezing on 02/13/2009
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Written by amongsttheangels  (2/13/2009 1:38:59 PM)

very interesting poem...deffinetely keep it up!

I have surrendered 


Written by queebgoogoo  (2/13/2009 1:50:48 PM)

I like this piece.

Bravo! 


Written by Lola29  (2/14/2009 4:53:56 PM)


Superb.... 


Written by mslacuna  (2/15/2009 2:52:48 AM)

I loved this piece. I do not know whether it was intentional that you used no punctuation, but either way the piece did not suffer too much from it. The second stanza, " in hurricanes I have complimented dead actresses and played othello
with what very well may have been
ghosts or simply vacant people....," amazing use of words and great imagery. I love Othello myself, so to see it referenced so, makes my hearts' strings flutter. "I have surrendered to heavier things" is a pitch perfect title and it almost sounds like it is a nod to the John Mayer album. If it is, I must give you kudos. The end very much compliments the beginning and I truly hope you continue with your "smithing" as only a birthed writer can.

wonderful write! 


Written by rachelle1165  (2/15/2009 12:55:18 PM)


 


Written by wickedhart  (2/17/2009 3:59:20 AM)


a gem 


Written by blogetry  (2/17/2009 10:37:07 AM)

of a write....captivating and alluring indeed!


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