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Forbidden Love
By Kayleen on 02/15/2009
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Written by cpbprasad  (2/15/2009 2:55:25 PM)

Beautiful Poem, The girl gave up her life for love.
Keep it up, keep writing more poems.

Prasad.

sorry 


Written by Puppyluv  (2/15/2009 9:21:09 PM)

I read this 2 times, once out loud, once to myself and i just couldn't get past the wordiness (I think this would make a good short story) and the conflict between "the girt' and "our mother" are you speaking about another couple? it would maje sense to me if it was about a sister.

Romeo and Juliet was kind of like this. and I do really like the way you let the stanzas roll down the story.


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