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My Way
By Lola29 on 02/16/2009
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emothional verse 


Written by EmptyBamboo  (2/16/2009 1:25:38 PM)


Loved your poem.
Just to make a contrast:

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I am old, ugly and poor
and I can buy almost nothing.
I have nothing to through
out and no one,
no one can leave me except... if anyone at all

Then what difference does it really make?

Always good to get a pro's take 

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Written by Lola29  (2/16/2009 3:31:55 PM)


 


Written by johnm  (3/19/2009 10:26:41 AM)

I liked this one. i think it is short, simple and to the point. Sometimes a view, or and emotion is never completely understood by others. Keep writting, as I see you have a ton of work just let it out!!
PS sorry for the delay in my reviews unfortunately I had lost my Mom in Jan. so it has been a bit insane to say the least.

 

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Written by Lola29  (3/19/2009 11:22:35 AM)

John, thank you for your review.
Please accept my condolences.
Lola

you'll find someone... 


Written by L  (4/2/2009 10:23:07 AM)

to love you your way
short and sweet


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