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A Piece of Me
By Natasia on 02/19/2009
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Love, oh Love...... 

Written by jdupy  (2/20/2009 2:44:35 PM)

I like this poem for its honesty, and for its message. The phrasing is good, as is the way the lines and stanzas are broken out. Nice Free Verse. Lines I love includ "...While to ghosts of my creation I paid homage." A very good poem.


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Written by bornwriter  (2/20/2009 6:00:05 PM)

i sense neglect. im sorry (what seems to be) your first love treated you that way


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Written by Natasia  (2/24/2009 2:36:57 PM)

Thanks, but I am not sorry, it made me who I am today. Good call, he was my very first love, for 5 years, and lesson learned, but otherwise a huge waste of time.

Mmmmmm .. 

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Written by IraFromSyosset  (3/25/2009 1:22:09 PM)


I have been reading many of your poems. I have not commented on them because I was unable to frame a cohesive statement. But wanted to find one that moved me. There is something I like very much about your writing.

This poem, I especially like. I feel you in some manner. There is a certain innocence and purity that comes across.

To Ira 

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Written by Natasia  (3/26/2009 9:14:54 AM)

Thanks for taking the time to read them, I realy appreciate it.

A piece of me 

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Written by lorrie  (3/26/2009 3:30:50 PM)

good poem

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