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I dream about you
By Blossom1102 on 03/18/2009
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Written by mslacuna  (3/22/2009 2:38:18 AM)

I think this piece would do well if you did some revision and extended it a bit. I think that if you put it in stanza form then it would pack a bigger punch. I understand that you wrote it 5 years ago; but as one matures, so does one's words. This could be a more intense and intimate piece if you revisited it.


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