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happily never after
By kmp on 03/20/2009
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Written by Losttothedarkness  (3/20/2009 4:06:52 PM)

I really like this poem! I've been in that situation and it sucks but eventually you either get over it or it becomes all you think about......

 

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Written by kmp  (3/20/2009 4:10:56 PM)


 

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Written by kmp  (3/20/2009 4:11:00 PM)


 


Written by Blossom1102  (3/20/2009 4:31:45 PM)

havent we all been in this situation before? it paints a good picture of your feelings....

Could be better 

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Written by kewlstar  (3/23/2009 3:43:09 AM)

Well this is poetry, even though you have a good theme, if you could "paint it" with words, it would have been much better. I wouldn't say you did not at all, you did, but i am sure you could write better if you could feel the situation more.

 


Written by StoneWhisper6  (3/24/2009 7:08:34 AM)

Hey Lil' Bit ... Another good read and a common factor for us all. We have all been down this road. Remember - Write what you know and you'll always know that it counts.


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