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Fallen in love
By lorrie on 03/26/2009
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Written by kewlstar  (3/27/2009 12:01:47 AM)

Short, but sweet.
perhaps a few "," and ";" marks would have helped with the flow, but in my opinion the poem lacks imagery, it lacks the element to catch someone's attention. However, i am sure with a few thoughts, you can definetly improve this poem, the theme is great, just improvise :P

 


Written by poetprincess  (4/4/2009 5:06:02 PM)

you tend to be repetitive and obvious. you have beautiful brilliant ideas though...you need to figure out how to say what you want to say without coming right out and saying it. try to lure the reader in....keep them guessing....


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