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By kewlstar on 03/27/2009
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Written by wickedhart  (3/27/2009 5:44:27 AM)

I really enjoyed reading this....very nice....I especially liked the first four lines....

Thank you 

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Written by kewlstar  (3/27/2009 6:15:54 AM)

Thank you wicked for reading :) and your comments too :D


Written by theswimmer90  (3/29/2009 2:14:56 AM)

The imagery you created in this poem was great! i could really see what was happening and feel the emotion you put into the poem. Great job! The only thing i saw (i could be crazy) is it seemed like your rhyme pattern really skipped around, in my opinion (could be totally different for others as you said in my review :p) just try sticking to one or two rhyme schemes instead of jumping around, it would totally help with the flow! other than that, awesome job, great poem!


Thank you 

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Written by kewlstar  (3/29/2009 12:54:16 PM)

Ahh, thank you for the comments swimmer, i understand what you meant, but i really did not intend to make this a poem with rhymes :P kind of wanted a free verse kind, sometimes i have rhymes because those words suits the imagery, but if you are looking for rhymes please read "Roses with thorns" :) but thank you for your comment, it was a great motivation to write a rhyme poem now :P


Written by Losttothedarkness  (3/30/2009 9:57:20 AM)

I really enjoyed reading this poem!! It was very good and I loved how I could almost see exactly what you were talking about!!

Great Job!


Written by edanalandells  (3/31/2009 12:02:10 PM)

But each word of every poem can mean something different to everyone! I like it.

Thank you 

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Written by kewlstar  (4/1/2009 12:51:20 AM)

Thank lost and edan for reading :). Edan why a 3 star? :(, any ways i could improve :)?


Written by Unknown Member  (5/3/2009 6:35:46 PM)


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Written by kewlstar  (5/4/2009 12:34:03 AM)

Thank you for your confessions ;).

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