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Short Love Story
By gilaniqaiser on 03/28/2009
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Written by Semara-4567  (3/28/2009 9:42:15 PM)

I love this can i copy and past it and put it in my poem book of all poems i love
I dont see why u need my teaching

love it 

Written by Semara-4567  (3/28/2009 9:42:43 PM)

love it


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Written by gilaniqaiser  (3/29/2009 1:56:07 AM)

Semara u made my with your comments:)
thanks a lot..
and ofocurse you can copy paste plz go on..i wil honored and yes i still need ur coaching caz i cnt write the way u do.i wwant to ride hard rock stuff like you/

Please try be more creative 

Written by kewlstar  (3/30/2009 12:34:42 AM)

I agree you are trying to create a free verse story here in this poem, majority of the lines in this poem is "clishe" (no off. personal opinion), esp. the first 2 paras.. i would have given you 3 star but, your last 2 lines had decent creativity and imagery. Your ideas are great, but try compare your feelings to an image, try draw a picture with words, it would make your poem beautiful. Good luck :)


Written by Losttothedarkness  (3/30/2009 9:33:03 AM)

I love this poem!! Not many people write things that don't say why they love someone but( in my opinion) most people don't know why they love someone!!! Good job!!

I love it!!


Written by edanalandells  (3/31/2009 12:03:45 PM)

That's all I can say. Powerful.


Written by TeenageHeart  (4/1/2009 4:08:27 AM)

awww thats really sweet :)
your always good at writing sweet poems.
keep it up :)


Written by Cherryberry  (5/4/2009 10:53:15 PM)

its beautiful almost made me want to cry. never have I experienced such a thing. It makes you want to live that kind of love.


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Written by gilaniqaiser  (5/7/2009 6:19:19 PM)

thanks a lot all of u for ur comments...
thanks Cherry
it makes me cry to when ever i read it:)


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Written by gilaniqaiser  (5/7/2009 6:19:25 PM)

thanks a lot all of u for ur comments...
thanks Cherry
it makes me cry to when ever i read it:)

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