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The Wolf
By niceguy09 on 03/31/2009
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Can be better 


Written by kewlstar  (4/1/2009 1:27:56 AM)

I can see you are aming towards the theme of pain from the loved one, but the poem lacks creative imagery, you can surely include better word choise, and the whole theme can be expressed in a much better way if you don't use the idea of "pill" from matrix :P. Try read the poem to yourself and check its flow, and i am sure you can improve this poem with a bit of editing. Good luck :)


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