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More Than Roses
By gtherange13 on 04/02/2009
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Written by IraFromSyosset  (4/2/2009 9:59:02 PM)

I love the sentiment. You have me about a third of the way thru and then some of your lines seem to get awkward. That's the problem with end rhymes; you get kinda forced into making rhymes and juggling our words. If this was your first pass, it can stand some revision ~ You are own your way to a great poem here!

More Than Roses 


Written by andraLiquori  (4/6/2009 12:00:41 PM)

Oh, it is so sweet and so romantic, I hope whomever you wrote it for appreciated it !


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