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painted words
By joshwayne on 04/03/2009
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Written by Unknown Member  (4/3/2009 6:53:54 AM)

I really, really like the line "my eyes follow it down and i lose my words." I think the choice of using enjambment right there at "words" momentarily isolates it from the continuation of the thought in the following stanza and gives it a special jolt, as though the persona of the poem is so moved by the falling snow that he is speechless. There are many other fantastic lines in this poem (attempting to paint in a tongue ive not heard) also. Excellent work.

Painted words 

Written by andraLiquori  (4/3/2009 10:48:30 AM)

Beautiful imagery ! I love the last 2 lines, they pull it all together ! Good going !


Written by wickedhart  (4/4/2009 5:14:47 AM)

I really like this....very nice....8-)

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