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By jaimeselizabeth18 on 04/03/2009
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Written by Losttothedarkness  (4/3/2009 3:49:55 PM)

I really love this poem and I can definately relate!!!!

Great Job

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Written by andraLiquori  (4/3/2009 4:00:52 PM)

Good work, I've been in the same position, so I understand - keep writing ! :-)

Needs rework 

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Written by IraFromSyosset  (4/3/2009 4:27:48 PM)

There is room for some serious rework in this poem; spelling errors. some of the end rhymes are forced.

That said, you had me in the first line. There are powerful feelings here. Enjoyed it very much. Excellent start!


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