Poet & Writing Community Poet Community
About Publish FAQ's Bookstore Free Poetry Contest
MoonTownCafe Home for Poets


  Search

Advanced Search
MoonTownCafe Home My Cafe Write Poems, Stories, and more Publish your Poems, Stories and Book My Friends on this Site Log-in
  Poetry & Writing ForumsFree Poetry ContestJournal

Read Reviews



Our Forever
By amg23psm6 on 04/06/2009
Viewed: 448
Reviews: 3
Rating:

Keep writing 

No Rating
Written by kewlstar  (4/7/2009 2:32:39 AM)

"Kismet" its a hindi word -- but a great meaning :)

Your poem is decent, but just like so many poems i have read and hense also written myself, have such clishe comparison with nature and love. Especially spring, and winter. The "petal by petal" idea is movie ideology, try be more creative. The poem is not bad the first 3 paras, but the last para you lose a bit of flow with "Some of my family does not see the love we share" and the line after that also. It just ruins the romantic moment i believe. Keep writing and best of luck :)

 

No Rating
Written by kennethcook  (6/9/2013 6:47:50 AM)

A great read! Lots of heartfelt, emotional feeling in this piece. Good job! 8-)

 


Written by kennethcook  (6/9/2013 6:48:19 AM)



Read User Reviews
Write Review
Report Poem

Add To Friend

Send To Friend
The Best Online Poem and Writing Community for all
 Members
   Username
Forgot Username?

Password
Forgot Password?
Not a member?
Sign up for free!

Premium Membership

  Newsletter

  Enter your email:
  Site Stats     Online members:0      Online guests:62      Total Users:23883      Total Poems:62966
© 2000-2016 MoonTownCafe.com. All rights reserved. LinksLink to UsPoet LinksContactPrivacy