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Tonight
By seworks on 04/07/2009
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Tonight 


Written by andraLiquori  (4/7/2009 2:41:34 PM)

Starts out nice and smooth, but ends too roughly, keep the softness - even though the emotion and need in the poem get more intense- pretty good though -

Tonight 

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Written by andraLiquori  (4/8/2009 7:42:15 PM)

This is alot better than the 1st version, none of the roughness, it stays smoothe I like it much better !


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