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bleed in me
By niceguy09 on 04/10/2009
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Bleed in Me 


Written by andraLiquori  (4/10/2009 7:44:52 PM)

I understand the topic of the poem, but maybe it could be more flowing, maybe qualify the phrase "bleed in me" with some more direct comparisons or explanations ?

 

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Written by niceguy09  (4/10/2009 7:48:23 PM)

this isnt one of my favs. i just posted it for the hell of it. i was under the influence of something when i wrote it, thats why i cant really explain what bleed in me means. i understand it, but its hard for me to translate the feeling into words.


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