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By spark on 04/11/2009
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Written by andraLiquori  (4/11/2009 4:48:19 PM)

Some grammar errors you should fix :" Don't my tears" instead of "doesn't my tears" - not "them no more" instead "them anymore", spelling: recognize and unrecognized, not "recognise" and unrecognised"-
I know this may seem picky, but it's quite important to use proper grammar and spelling to write poetry well -


Written by lorrie  (4/11/2009 6:07:04 PM)

good poem

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