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Love for a friend
By Borrelli on 04/17/2009
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Love For a Friend 


Written by andraLiquori  (4/17/2009 3:30:28 PM)

It needs some sort of rhythm, it seems rather choppy, but I think you can turn this into a good poem - sometimes reading it out loud to yourself helps with the rhythm -

 


Written by TheDividedAngel  (4/17/2009 4:15:15 PM)


 

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Written by Renny829  (4/18/2009 1:29:52 PM)

I love this poem, it is definatly one of my favorites :)


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