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Flicker
By andy on 04/17/2009
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shift? 


Written by JdSchooley  (4/17/2009 7:16:47 PM)

There's so much here to consider. It reads more like prose.

I like the feel, but for a poem, I would consider removing some extra verds, etc.

I am not thrilled with the title, consider the line "Whisper in the Dark" ??

Flicker 


Written by tercarro  (1/26/2010 4:42:24 PM)

Brilliant piece of work that took me to that same place. It was so involved and open that I could feel the pain and sense of futility that comes through here and there. I loved this work.

 


Written by Biggus  (1/27/2010 5:01:44 AM)


a poignant poem! 


Written by quleen  (1/29/2010 8:46:34 AM)

in the flicker of candle light...
exceptionally good of its kind!


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