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Love in the Making
By MunkofFunk on 05/03/2009
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Written by Mystic_Beauty  (5/3/2009 6:21:18 PM)

Great poem, full of emotion in a moment in time. I feel line 6 may require a commar before "we pause".
So there is a pause. Because there is, after all, a moment when it happens.
But your words a re great, thanks for the read

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