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Sweet Child
By Aileen on 05/09/2009
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Sweet Child 

Written by andraLiquori  (5/9/2009 9:40:41 PM)

I REALLY like this poem VERY much - I like the concept - it could be a bit smoother though - try reading it outloud to yourself, sometimes that helps me - this poem is very good and definitely worth reworking ! :-)

sweet child 

Written by poeticone  (5/11/2009 4:36:43 AM)

would that we could all be seen through the eyes of a sweet child , where innocence and true love rule , of course , we all need someone , be it angel or friend or loved one but i am ever hopeful that when we do arrive in the land of forever love , the sweet child within all of us will once more come to he fore . all our imperfections and despair will be no more and once more innocence and love will reign supreme .


Written by TheDividedAngel  (5/17/2009 4:59:56 PM)

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