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Bitter Thunder
By zlobna7879 on 05/20/2009
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Written by JdSchooley  (5/20/2009 6:01:48 PM)

I Feel Your Pain!
Seriously, there is a scary place in these words.

"begining" is a sp (beginning) is correct.


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Written by zlobna7879  (5/20/2009 6:03:29 PM)

thanks i'll correct it right away :))

Beautiful poem 

Written by kewlstar  (5/20/2009 6:40:20 PM)

Bitter Thunder 

Written by andraLiquori  (5/20/2009 7:04:21 PM)

Very good - very deep - I like how you leave the ending open - good write!


Written by Onojin  (5/24/2009 3:56:59 PM)

this has a slightly nightmarish quality to it, which is a compliment because its supposed to be a lil dark...the desperation and helplessness of a bad dream is portrayed here very well

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