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Sweet Love
By zlobna7879 on 05/20/2009
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Romantic 


Written by kewlstar  (5/20/2009 6:45:53 PM)

Written with a heart, i can see the emotion flowing from you to this poem.

In a love poem: try avoid using "heart" "soul" "sun" etc. the common words used. your poem would sound like just any other love poem. If you are trying to be unique, you have to try and avoid using words majority of the writers use :). It is hard, even i am unable to avoid using such words. But try, it will make you a better writer.

Nice poem here.
Keep writing :)

Sweet Love 


Written by andraLiquori  (5/20/2009 8:25:01 PM)

You come up with some good ideas, I like this !

 

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Written by zlobna7879  (5/20/2009 8:27:48 PM)

thanks for the advice,i'll try to do so :)

thanks ^^

 


Written by Onojin  (5/24/2009 3:54:49 PM)

some good questions to start, ones we can all relate to. then some brilliant and evocative deions of what u feel, poignant and elegant, and a soothing ending


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