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By zlobna7879 on 05/20/2009
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Written by InkOnSkin  (5/20/2009 8:30:47 PM)

An interesting poem but I fail to feel the connection and essence of it. Maybe try tweak it a little?


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Written by zlobna7879  (5/20/2009 8:35:34 PM)

i'll try to make it have more sense,thanks thou for the advice ^^


Written by JdSchooley  (5/21/2009 2:28:11 PM)

That's Pretty Good!
I like the simple vagueness of the piece, here I am able to imagine what is not said.



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Written by zlobna7879  (5/23/2009 11:54:57 AM)

thanks Jd :)

Love poem? 

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Written by kewlstar  (5/23/2009 2:25:24 PM)

Your poem gives very few "tingles" of love to the read :) Maybe why it is not appreciated. Dark poetry requires some light somewhere :) for readers to enjoy.


Written by Onojin  (5/24/2009 3:51:23 PM)

ooh, this is pretty dark, but in darkness is the principle of light, to illuminate the way, for us all :)

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