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Scar Tissue
By wickedhart on 05/22/2009
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Written by IraFromSyosset  (5/22/2009 6:57:08 AM)

This poem flows smoothly. Says a lot with few words. I like it very much. Well done.


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Written by wickedhart  (5/26/2009 1:57:10 AM)

Thanks Ira......

Too short 

Written by kewlstar  (5/26/2009 8:28:31 PM)

Short and nice. But I was left asking for more of this poem. Great start, but i sense its incomplete. Words are scattered...
You are inflicting pain on each other...
You still bleed...
Maybe i want to see happy ending ;) not an incomplete ending :D


Written by gilaniqaiser  (5/29/2009 3:06:51 AM)

U have left me speechless, this is so profound...and an extra ordinary beautiful write by you.


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Written by wickedhart  (5/29/2009 4:33:51 AM)

Thank you g......


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Written by wickedhart  (5/30/2009 4:20:39 AM)

Thank you kewlstar for reading this and for the comment.....I am thinking that I might add more....I don't think that I am finished.....

Scar Tissue 

Written by Unknown Member  (6/6/2009 1:14:41 AM)

I'm not convinced you should add anything to this poem. I mean, do what you must but it feels complete to me, within me. It's filled with so much poignant imagery...sometimes more is less.

I love your poems......


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Written by wickedhart  (6/23/2009 4:02:26 AM)

Thank you ramonledesma for reading this and for the comment....

indeed they are 

Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/5/2010 9:42:40 AM)

I know I have a whip for tongue. Lord tame it for once we thoruh our poison we can not heal the pain not take them back.

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