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By monter on 05/22/2009
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Written by andraLiquori  (5/22/2009 9:26:43 AM)

This needs to be worked out smoother so that it sounds like poetry, even free verse is great, but this oes not sound like that, it soulds like you are just talking. Sorry I had to say that, but it's how we all learn !Helpful hint, read it outloud and see what it sounds like, that helps me !


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