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Short love stories
By kewlstar on 05/27/2009
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Written by Unknown Member  (5/27/2009 11:02:23 PM)

I'm writing this review in pink. ;)

Very nice. I especially like,
"I am the freshness of spring,
In your breath.
How will you,
Stop yourself from breathing"

Sweet. :)

 

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Written by kewlstar  (5/27/2009 11:20:16 PM)

/cry
/slits
/emo
/life is over
:P

Val my eyes hurt, pink is hard to read :D
Ty for reading btw :)
and commenting :)
And singing:)

 

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Written by Unknown Member  (5/27/2009 11:44:44 PM)

Why us!? Why us!??

=P

 

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Written by kewlstar  (5/28/2009 8:03:31 AM)

Cuz we are special!

 


Written by zlobna7879  (5/31/2009 3:23:47 PM)

wow,i like this so much,it's so sad and powerful,great written :D
you're a amazing writer,hat down for you.
keep it up like that :)

Thank you 

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Written by kewlstar  (6/1/2009 12:08:36 PM)

Zolbna for your kind comments :) glad you liked it. It was meant to be simple and sweet. :).

 


Written by Biggus  (6/2/2009 9:38:38 AM)


Thank you biggus for reading :) 

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Written by kewlstar  (6/3/2009 12:02:45 PM)


Ouch! 


Written by supriyamothay  (6/4/2009 4:21:11 AM)

You can only feel the pain of love, but to express it, you need an art! I like the last part a lot... "But such the condition of my heart,
I can't live without meeting you again"

However, I feel the second line of this verse is too long:

"Poetry from friends,
You won't be able to live with such pain"

Maybe it could be:

"Poetry from friends,
Stay away from such pain"

Just a thought!!!

You have a power with words! :)

 

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Written by kewlstar  (6/4/2009 8:47:42 PM)

Thank you for reading. I admire your suggestions :) Yes, i perhaps should make it shorter :D


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