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Moon Song
By JdSchooley on 06/06/2009
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katie163 

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Written by JdSchooley  (7/24/2009 9:34:33 PM)

Thanks! Jd

 


Written by Unknown Member  (8/4/2009 1:55:08 PM)

Oh my, this one's beautiful! I love your choice of the words, the imagery of the poem is beautiful. It reminds me of the romantics. My favourite is the third stanza.
Well done!
Nela

Nela 

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Written by JdSchooley  (8/4/2009 2:32:54 PM)

So many nice comments. You are too kind.
Jd

this is lovely, Jd 

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Written by westcoastmama  (10/20/2009 12:25:09 AM)

I am back and reading, writing and crtiquing. I am so happy that it was this piece I chose to read first. I'm off to read some more...

~Mary

westcoastmama 

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Written by JdSchooley  (10/20/2009 11:44:16 AM)

Thanks for the nice words. I look forward to your new ones, westcoastmama .............Jd

 

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Written by CityBratz  (7/10/2010 3:18:18 PM)

no doubt, my fav love poem!

 

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Written by CityBratz  (7/10/2010 3:18:32 PM)


dam!!! 


Written by Mikey1174  (7/11/2010 12:06:15 AM)

tantilizing currents ripple down my spine...that was beautiful...a work of art

Mikey1174 

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Written by JdSchooley  (9/5/2010 11:13:43 PM)

Your review slid right past me, guy. Sorry for the late reply. Thanks, and keep up the good stuff on your cafe, it's ALLRiiighT
..............Jd

Thanks for suggesting this piece 


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (11/18/2010 8:10:29 AM)

I like how the fist word of your poem commands the reader to visualize. -That is quite effective and evocative. I can see the gossip about the nightly escapades. You use the same evocative principle at the beginning of all your stanzas. I like that. You call upon the scene awakening them to perception with each and every stanza. The metaphoric work here is also superb. It really speaks as to your creativity skills. I like that this piece has an implied romantic air to it, without being mushy. You were right, I really enjoyed this piece.



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