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RAIN
By karugakevin on 06/10/2009
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Written by karugakevin  (6/10/2009 2:57:32 AM)

i am feel this sweetpain

 

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Written by karugakevin  (6/10/2009 3:00:24 AM)


 


Written by InkOnSkin  (6/10/2009 3:02:49 AM)

This is a good poem~

I believe some minor adjustment will squeeze more of its sweeter juices that will enhance in particular, the flow of things.

I'm just wondering why the sudden change of language style from the 6th stanza?

 


Written by sheppaja  (6/10/2009 3:06:54 PM)


Hmm 


Written by kewlstar  (6/19/2009 4:48:59 PM)

Some of the thought process in this poems is common to everyone who is writing a poem of sorrow. The theme is cliche. Although if it is a personal poem, i do not mean to offend how you feel about this poem. All i am saying is if you feel it, try write it different than what everyone writes :) then you pain will be felt better by the reader :). good poem though. Keep writing :)


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