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The Special Gift Of You
By Mystic_Beauty on 06/16/2009
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The Special Gift of You 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (6/16/2009 7:34:57 PM)

Exellently written ! Bravo !

 


Written by JdSchooley  (6/17/2009 1:00:46 PM)

I like this and believe it to a good piece. I do think the rhyme becomes common at places like leaves, eve, sea and top and pot. I might wonder if these are not vital enough points to be considered for a polishing for more eloquent rhyming words?
Nice, just the same. Jd

 

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Written by Mystic_Beauty  (6/23/2009 5:28:55 PM)

Thank you for your input. it is greatly appreciated. I'm after all the help i can get. You never know, one day I may get it right and get my book out.


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