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By marie87 on 06/24/2009
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Written by DesertBoyIan  (6/24/2009 7:52:39 AM)

Nice write - I'd like to see it in poetry form rather than prose form, and a couple of spelling errors :liein is Lieing,just is just, livein is living, ment is meant, rite is right. I know it seems picky but it does effect the quality of the peace - also don't use computer language like "ur" "u" etc. use the real words, as it also affects the quality of the poem -

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