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By zlobna7879 on 06/24/2009
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Written by JdSchooley  (6/25/2009 11:50:11 AM)

You have some nice images and phrases. "finding one tulip
in countless roses... " has some uniqueness. I am not getting a real clear concept over all. The message may be too broad, or there may need to be more specific detail. I am not sure how this poem should make me feel. I hope you can rework it, it might be great.
Jd

Well written :) 


Written by kewlstar  (7/15/2009 7:41:02 PM)

You have improved drastically, there is so much more quality in your poetry now. I really enjoyed reading this, you have some great thoughts and images here :)


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