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I wish life to be like this
By aman3355 on 07/02/2009
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I wish life to be like this 


Written by DesertBoyIan  (7/2/2009 12:08:47 PM)

very nice sentiment ! Although it seems rather choppy - that happens to all of us sometimes - try reading it outloud to yourself and see if you can hear it - just try to smooth it out a bit more. :-)


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