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The Core
By Mystic_Beauty on 07/15/2009
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Written by JdSchooley  (8/10/2009 7:49:55 PM)

We are all in this together, so when I read a poem such as this, I am reminded that love can be for a very few, it seems. I hope yours is fine and true as in this nice poem.

I will just add, the flavor is plain. I urge you to color the language with some imagery.
Keep at it. Jd

 

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Written by Mystic_Beauty  (1/18/2013 3:36:57 AM)

Going back to the reason for this..... sometimes things are black and white. Colour is the result ....




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