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By zlobna7879 on 07/29/2009
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Written by kewlstar  (8/2/2009 12:00:06 AM)

Few grammatical errors here, re-read it :)
the idea is great, just need some time invested in this poem more :)


Written by JdSchooley  (8/12/2009 5:31:25 PM)

I caught a couple places that seem to be typos. "she didn''t even
had a clue" did you mean (she didn't even
have a clue"
We are all of us a little naive about one thing or another. I can't write in any language but English, and even that is not too well achieved.

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