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I'll always love you
By aman3355 on 09/01/2009
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I'll Always Love You 

Written by DesertBoyIan  (9/1/2009 10:08:46 AM)

Nice, but something about the flow makes it hard to read, it needs to be smoother, so it just flows as it's read - try reading it outloud and perhaps you can see what I mean -

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