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What happened to me
By (*Made_of_Rain_and_Tears*) on 12/17/2009
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Good work 

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Written by tercarro  (1/25/2010 2:35:54 PM)

In think this has promise but I would suggest working on it a little more because there are some gaps that stop it from flowing smoothly such as "my roomate been here for years".
I see the story but I think you rushed it.


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