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forbidden love
By ollieeex3 on 01/10/2010
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Written by JdSchooley  (1/11/2010 10:51:27 AM)

Some sadly strong thoughts here that cause my own introspection and compelling wonder with past relations. Good composition and transition leading us along the thread. "frostbitten hands in yours
and held it against your face." should not 'it' be plural? good write........Jd


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