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By xxbeautifulxdisasterxx on 01/12/2010
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the rhyme scheme seems a little forced 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (1/13/2010 3:02:42 PM)

thisnmakes the poem a little hard to read. There is much room for improvement on this piece. But the feelings overall as a theme IS GOOD. -wanting to escape in music, or not looking behind as if that will nullify all, etc... watch your capitalization and punctuation. Thanks for the read.

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