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The Visions Torment Me So
By midnightwolf on 01/12/2010
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the momories of someone from the past? 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (1/13/2010 2:37:33 PM)

Or is it a ghost like vision? Either way this peace let you thinking. What does he say? It is abvios that what is seen causes pain as you beg them to come to an end.

well... 

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Written by midnightwolf  (1/13/2010 6:11:08 PM)

i have a boyfriend but we are seperated and I keep hearing tid bits of news about him which teases me more than knowing nothing. thanx for the comment!

 


Written by ollieeex3  (1/20/2010 3:58:27 PM)

an extremely powerful poem, but just some suggestions. i think the first line should be taken out, the second line should be changed to "the cruel world hands me thin air," and "visions" in the second to last line should be replaced by another word. nightmare, perhaps? but your poem, your choice. even so, it's a good read the way it is now.

thanx, gr8 suggestions 

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Written by midnightwolf  (1/20/2010 6:29:49 PM)

i changed it and it sounds better i have trouble editing my poetry so thanks for the welcome suggestions!


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