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A Mountain, An Ocean
By wickedhart on 02/05/2010
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Reviews: 8

This is so, so beautiful 

Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/5/2010 9:35:39 AM)

I love all about this poem.
-your choice of words
-the romantic tone of your inspiration
-the love that is seen in every line
-the opposite of your analogies (they work)

You made them work. Two Thumb UP!


Written by mwhousemouse  (2/6/2010 3:35:40 PM)

Absolute immersion. Totally devout love expressed
in lovely flowing images. Musical in tone. A beautiful piece.

Thanks Michael


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Written by wickedhart  (2/10/2010 3:53:47 AM)

Thank you for the comments...they are much appreciated and thanks for reading....


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Written by lilysalem  (5/15/2010 9:54:26 AM)

two words..simply perfect!


Written by Biggus  (5/17/2010 10:03:08 AM)


Written by gilaniqaiser  (5/25/2010 4:20:25 PM)

Do i have to repeat words every time tocomment on u? just perfect

a mountain an ocean 

Written by gabriel6  (9/28/2010 7:58:50 PM)

you are a very romantic writer and this was lovely how he can shape your world and move you my only neg comment is that it ends the same as bocceleilis woman but maybe its a series and that is how you like to end your work but anyway its class and a fine read cheers fgabriel 6 glenn from down under


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Written by wickedhart  (9/29/2010 1:08:26 AM)

Thank you glenn for your kind words....and for reading this!

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