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The Storm of a Broken Heart
By sturgeon101 on 02/08/2010
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Written by Max_Kirby  (2/8/2010 8:46:34 AM)


simply superb 


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/11/2010 9:49:11 AM)

I hate that I love you was my favorite line. such simple worsd yet so powerful meaning. This whole piece to me was heartdore felt. Great job.

 

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Written by sturgeon101  (2/11/2010 11:32:29 AM)

thank youuuu so much:)

Great 


Written by DancingFire  (2/11/2010 3:11:43 PM)

Very well done =)

 


Written by piama  (3/4/2010 2:01:22 PM)

The refrain echoes:)..some really good imagery - "iris stained lies" is an interesting image I have to think about ...I enjoyed the read a lot:)

 


Written by TiffanyRachelle  (3/5/2010 10:18:52 PM)

I've noticed that you really like repetition... I like it here! It really works, and i like that it's set apart in stanzas!
You also have a tree motif throughout your pieces, and i like that too. Trees are so elegant and can express so many different emotions and evoke so many different images.
I like it!


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