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sick to my stomach
By breakfast@tiffanys on 04/12/2010
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Written by flanders  (5/27/2010 2:38:08 AM)


 

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Written by khushi  (4/6/2011 10:57:07 AM)

very nice poem..nicely expressed..simple n sweet..

n well u rely shouldn't have done it.....wat if it your partner did it for fun???

 


Written by Ghostwriter  (4/6/2011 1:27:57 PM)

I like the honesty...it flows very fluently, nice ballad. and heartfelt i feel...exploring the feelings of guilt/shame etc may be a painful process, but you could draw a lot more great writing from it. keep going.


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