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By Biggus on 06/16/2010
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Written by mwhousemouse  (6/16/2010 8:07:06 AM)

leaving this a question is the strength of this piece.
It leaves it for the reader to ponder.
Nicely done Michael

In praise of form 

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Written by HAZARD  (6/20/2010 8:09:58 PM)

I think this would make a wonderful formal poem.
One of the best is undoubtedly locked in its arms of themes and repetitive phrases - I will leave you to decide where to take it - if you wish to take it any further at all....

Wonderful start towards poetic force...



Written by HAZARD  (6/26/2010 3:37:06 AM)

A difficult decision... 

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Written by HAZARD  (6/26/2010 3:40:50 AM)

I enjoyed this almost slumber driven questioning and sensitive touch... But there is an old saying ...

You cannot make an omlette without breaking eggs.

Good thoughts, thankyou.



Written by Sweet_lil_mama  (7/4/2010 4:28:58 PM)

that is a very good poem. it really touched me. did u have an inspiration for that poem, someone u were thinking of when u made it?

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