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“Just Like a Moth”
By annaandrea75 on 06/17/2010
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just like a moth 

Written by lindaseaver  (6/17/2010 4:09:05 AM)

liked your poem very original point of view enjoyed reading it


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Written by mwhousemouse  (6/17/2010 8:02:21 AM)

An absolutely wonderful use of simile to set up your rhetorical question. I enjoyed this very much. Especially "the widow of our passion?"

Thanks Michael

Just Like a Moth 

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Written by annaandrea75  (6/18/2010 1:03:56 AM)

Thank you kindly to both of you!

Energy abounds 

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Written by HAZARD  (6/20/2010 8:04:45 PM)

I enjoyed this poem of sacrifice and temptation - the temptation to end what is given freely.

Love and life. Spirals of control - of incandescent death - the soft click of wings and wonder - yet the moth knows only the light - knows not loves galvanic debt - its magnetic field of dreams - obessions heat - stifled or rejected....

So much to ponder and to write about in this theme...

excites my ideas.


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Written by annaandrea75  (6/28/2010 7:46:19 AM)

Thank you, Hazard!

I'm honoured that you find this subject as inspiring!
In any case, I want to assure you that I'm not pretending to be a good poet, sending subliminal messages...it was mere analogy. I simply write as my mood guides me! I still have a lot of things to learn about writing in general. English is not my mother language, you know, but I simply find it inspiring, being so rich and versatile!

Thank you, once more!

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