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dark side
By madamdesiree824 on 07/14/2010
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Hi Katherine 

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Written by Jon von Nottingham  (7/14/2010 8:48:06 AM)

Clever, but was hoping for something a little less cliche. Would like to see more half-rhymes. Also you keep the meter pretty tight at about 6 syllables until the line- you like to taunt" where that falls apart. Overall, an enjoyable read, look forward to seeing more.


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